All Comments on 'Last Christmas Party Ch. 02: Linda'

And I was worried there would be a problem. 7 stars, the Bear thinks it deserves it. It would have been ten, but Tom didn't get to beat the living daylights out of Jake. The Bear apologizes for doubting, boss. Mea Culpa. Great story. Good ending. Love it. Screw the naysayers.

The BEAR

Ultimately a silly story, the same formula as so many others.

Simple answer to all this. He/they should have got out when he knew what the jig was. Him carrying on for the 'company' was just plain stupid. If you see a problem that involves your family you GET OUT. He was supposed to be a in a position that sees risk and consequences and did not act on it. Shame on him. Thus the writer let him stay just for the rest of the story and that makes it really silly.

to long and finished to quick should been condensed and finished with more insight

This was a great story. Five stars for sure. I thought that Linda should not have gone to that company Christmas party. I really enjoyed the story!!!

Wonderful story The second time I have read it I have started rereading a lot of my previous stories as Mr Litorotica is filling loving wives section with forced cuckold stories which I hate Seems every second story now is one of them SHAME Oh well Best wishes to you (jaybee186)

Would have liked some closure and "justice" for asshole.

good story

I don't get why we needed a recounting of the previous chapter's highlights from Linda's mouth. Waste of half a page. Should just have been something like "Linda told her the events leading up to the party" then continued from there into new details. Glad she didn't get raped though. That would have been a 1-star after all that effort.

Why would Linda accept a drink from someone she knows is trying to fuck up her family? Literally dumb as fuck. I can't buy that she's that stupid after knowing what they know at that point. Mind you, not as stupid as Tom not telling her to stay at home and realizing Jake was playing him with that desperate last-minute report request. It was obvious to everyone it was just a stall tactic.

Would make agreat movie

Taking fiction to another level of stupidity. The story line was absurd as was the plot line.