by Amisit__Scintilla
I was enthralled with this story. So well written. The characters were delightful and very easy to become engaged with. Can’t wait to see where this goes !!
A really nice first effort. Keep doing what you are doing. It could have used a little more editing but it didn't detract from your story. Looking forward to reading your other stories.
A nicely paced intro, into the story. Can't wait to fin out what happens next!