All Comments on 'Last Humans Alive: Brother & Sister'

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juanviejojuanviejoover 2 years ago

Good while it lasted!

tex4tgtex4tgover 2 years ago

Nice start I hope that isn't the end .

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Fantastic story, I loved the scifi element of it all. There were a few noticeable typos and grammar problems but it didn't take away from what a fun story this was. Hopefully this leads to a sequel to show more adventures between these two and explore the world they're left in.

I only wished you explained why the sister constantly had do masturbate, more so than her brother apparently. Maybe you can say something about the radiation having an effect on her, or those life-extending injections has a side effect. Just a suggestion if there is a sequel in the workds.

CoralseaCoralseaover 2 years ago

An awesome beginning to a great series. Please keep it going.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

So the world leaders must let the bombs fly out of meanness after they left? Nobody noticed all the rich people and leaders leaving and wondered what was up? Sounds like the only people left were idiots, including the Dad that was supposed to be smart enough to make a bunker, but not smart enough to make it there.

I'm kind of surprised, with all the illogical stuff going on, that the kid didn't have any inch cock to go with his sisters 42 ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ tits. That would have gone right along with the rest of this.

Ozgood13Ozgood13over 2 years ago

Gamma World meets Porn I like it.

Cutty4637Cutty4637over 2 years ago

Don't stop there.

grampaaloisiusgrampaaloisiusover 2 years ago

Nice idea, nice story.

But too short.

A novel made of this would be fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
LOL!

These two idiots are too fucking stupid to walk around unsupervised!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story, interesting premise. Glad to see you posting again. I've re-read the "Stacie" series often.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Should’ve let her get demolished by the wolves,I mean last one standing right

Frankie1952Frankie19529 months ago

More please, how many babies do they make in an effort to repopulate the earth.

BrendaNWBrendaNW5 months ago

Please cintinie

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