All Comments on 'Last One Out of Eden'

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Very well written. It was a pleasure to read.

Very well written. I loved the story.

This puts you right up there with the best authors on this site or anywhere else for that matter.

Does US English not use "shone" as the past participle of "shine"? I've noticed the use of "shined" in other authors work too.

It is now one of my very favorites. Thank you for this one!

As always I appreciate everyone who took the time to read my story. The positive feedback always makes me want to write more and get better.

Gorgeous story. Gorgeous, the predictable is honest, it's what most of us would have done...

Please keep writing, love your stuff.

FDD

Was quite a story. The end was sad but we'll done.

You are by far my favorite writer on this site.....even though I’m still crying from the ending.

Wow. Wow, again. It's too bad I can only give you five stars. It deserves more.

Awesome job. Great story.

Of all the stories I’ve read on this site this is the best one ever. And I’ve read 1,000’s. The sex was good but the story telling was breathtaking. I even found myself shedding a little tear. I’m sure you hear this allot but maybe a story of the baby as an adult learning what happened to dad and struggling to come to terms with that type of love and loss. Do you plan another story in this series? Anyway Well done!!!

Jim

jimmyhmmnd@yahoo.com

I may sign off of Literotica pretty soon. I find myself speed reading the sex to get to the story and this one was very good, one of the top ten I've read here. Great work.

The best thing I've reqd in this site or any other erotica site ever. Nothing will ever surpass this ever again and I'm quite sure of it. Truly, you made a masterpiece here with this. I was glued like a spider while reading this.

Absolutely an amazing and breathtaking story. Thank you so much for making this. Much appreciated for this wonderful peace of literature.

Last One... reminded me of some of the greats you cited in the opening paragraph. I pretty much match Jeffery's profile; I got my first taste of Sci Fi in the '60's, and was hooked at first bite.

You have some definitive writing skills. This was a wonderful short story, you should be proud.

Thanks for sharing your imagination, and especially thanks for all the work it takes to put together a Lit submission. The reading enjoyment I derived is greatly appreciated.

Regards, and best wishes to you and yours, in the troubled times we live,

GeoD

How am I just discovering you? This was short SciFi at its best. Reminded me of Asimov’s shorts. Thank you for sharing your imagination and writing.

Aw, I knew exactly how it would end!

Still,I was deeply touched by the ending anyway! Thanks

I thought they'd share a partial dose of the yellow dose while in orbit, waiting for things on earth to settle down before returning.

You done good.

I normally don't like the Sci-Fi genre on this site. I did read your story and was pleasantly surprised. I'm overlooking the few wording and spelling errors in view of the fantastical, but believable story. For your other stories, please get an editor so that the quality of your writing is not diminished by grammar and spelling errors. You have promise. Good Job!

"I'm Jeffery Hawke"

Of course he is. In a story like this, the male lead would never be Percy Witherspoon.