All Comments on 'Last Request'

by HungryGuy

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NewManInTexasNewManInTexasover 18 years ago
Bizzare but creative

Bizarre, but great. I suspect we are all dying to know her feelings the first few days or weeks of being encased. Thatw ould take some careful thought to write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Chilling!!!!!!!!

I had a feeling. The feeling didn't stop. Reading your story made me want to close my eyes and not see it any more, but alas I read on, and was mollified, knew it was coming and it did. You have written a great piece of work. Thank You. Thanks, D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story!

I think it works best the way it is, without us knowing what she is thinking. It's so much more chilling because when she becomes the statue she actually disappears--and because we don't know whether she really understands what she's getting into. Thanks for the great story!

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