All Comments on 'Late Again'

by Thirsty1

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Incentive

With punishment like this for being so late, I'll never be early, and gladly take (and give) my licks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

This was great and I cant wait for more!

nz_marienz_marieover 17 years ago
Please continue

very good so far, you really need to finish it off now, there are so many possiblities of what can happen next. I'd really like to read what she had in mind to teach him for being late and keeping her waiting ;)

AnaLeePleasuredAnaLeePleasuredabout 17 years ago
Wide Open...

You have left the door wide open to your bedroom with this story and exposed a lot of yourself. This is a good thing as it sets your story apart from the many others. It is refreshingly honest and well written. I would have rolled you onto your stomach though...and then you would REALLY have gotten punished...but that would just be me living up to my name...

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