All Comments on 'Late Hour Romance'

Please write more. I really enjoyed this.

I enjoyed this story write more chapters

Your preamble says first story here; does that mean you have written elsewhere? Because for a first (?) effort this is well written and shows plenty of promise. Watch the small points such as "Dani" turning to "Danny"---not a terrible error but of the kind that can jump out of the page at the reader.

Can I make a suggestion? Try writing something longer, developing plot and character and making the sex secondary to these. On the basis of this story, I think you have the ability to do this.

please

Continue please. Looking forward to maybe more chapters?

dreams come true - more like a potential nightmare.