by scbolder
Nice premise.
Woild have been nice if there had been more in the way of foreplay before cock entered pussy. If not him playing with them, them playing with his cock and balls. Didn't see a need to have each girl rush to orgasm.
Odd that nobody seemed to care about unprotected sex and having him cum in their pussies.
Four stars.
Let’s hope for more adventures with the girls…. Love to see the two creampies result in sexy pregnant girls. And would hope that a second or third round might result in all the girls happily pregnant.
Great story. I only wished you showed what led them to decide to seduce Bobby, I felt that little mystery was a big plot hole. But other then that this was a great story, very sexy, with a good premise behind that game.
Good story, but believe I have heard this one before, very similar story, where 5 girls, plus the male on the couch
Trite and predictable. Same plot, over and over. Do uninspired wannabes really think nobody will notice?
Great story, I can't wait to read more of your work. I used to enjoy truth or dare, but it always ended when someone tried to go to far with the girls who played with us.
awesome story
is Sarah going to tell her brother what happend before, why these girls took this risk and if the other girls knew about Sarah and Bobby
Very few people EVER have this kind of luck! Great story! Full Marks 5-Stars!
cageysea9725, commented (7) months ago...could have kept that to yourself. Again, a reader who has to be all NEGATIVE about commenting, when could have moved on to another story...but, NNNNOOOO, has to be mean...😕😒👿
Five **5** Stars...love the story, especially sister Sarah sharing in the fun! On to next chapter!
Good premise.
Well written.
A bit too much 'story', and not enough details of the sex.
Four stars.
I find this to be a most interesting start of a story. Everyone, except the brother, know Sarah is the sister but they still played apparently without reservations. I hope the author develops the characters, in both beath and depth. Likewise, the plot and subplots will be seamlessly merged. The pyschologic aspects of the brother and sister must be developed.