All Comments on 'Late Night Truth or Dare Ch. 01: Bobby'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice premise.

Woild have been nice if there had been more in the way of foreplay before cock entered pussy. If not him playing with them, them playing with his cock and balls. Didn't see a need to have each girl rush to orgasm.

Odd that nobody seemed to care about unprotected sex and having him cum in their pussies.

Four stars.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

A little slow at the beginning but it finished nicely.

collin4xxxcollin4xxxover 2 years ago

Let’s hope for more adventures with the girls…. Love to see the two creampies result in sexy pregnant girls. And would hope that a second or third round might result in all the girls happily pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fabulous story. Hope you continue on with it.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Great story. I only wished you showed what led them to decide to seduce Bobby, I felt that little mystery was a big plot hole. But other then that this was a great story, very sexy, with a good premise behind that game.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story, but believe I have heard this one before, very similar story, where 5 girls, plus the male on the couch

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

Trite and predictable. Same plot, over and over. Do uninspired wannabes really think nobody will notice?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome, erotic and believable.

mammoetmammoetover 2 years ago

liked it a lot and hope there will be more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome story, 5stars.

rutherford366rutherford366over 2 years ago

Great story, I can't wait to read more of your work. I used to enjoy truth or dare, but it always ended when someone tried to go to far with the girls who played with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

awesome story

is Sarah going to tell her brother what happend before, why these girls took this risk and if the other girls knew about Sarah and Bobby

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This definitely needs part 2

enseignerenseignerover 2 years ago

Please do more parts. Thanks you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very few people EVER have this kind of luck! Great story! Full Marks 5-Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years ago

cageysea9725, commented (7) months ago...could have kept that to yourself. Again, a reader who has to be all NEGATIVE about commenting, when could have moved on to another story...but, NNNNOOOO, has to be mean...😕😒👿

Five **5** Stars...love the story, especially sister Sarah sharing in the fun! On to next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Well written.

A bit too much 'story', and not enough details of the sex.

Four stars.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a24 days ago

I find this to be a most interesting start of a story. Everyone, except the brother, know Sarah is the sister but they still played apparently without reservations. I hope the author develops the characters, in both beath and depth. Likewise, the plot and subplots will be seamlessly merged. The pyschologic aspects of the brother and sister must be developed.

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Chapter 8 of Late Night Truth or Dare is here. It has been a long wait, but I felt that I should wrap up the story in some way, even if it was not how I initially intended to get there.

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