All Comments on 'Late Night Visitor'

I've given you 5 stars because I like your writing style, but the story only merited 3/4 stars.

A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff in each chapter. This one had a good setup and the transition was just getting interesting when it ended. That's poor writing.

You should have waited until you had more to post before you submitted your story.

I want to know what mom has to say when they both end up pregnant.

Looks like we have a good 3some story line started. Make him a lucky man with two sister wifes and 2 children on the way.

but damn I was hoping one of those night visits was his mother-in-law.! Lol! Five stars!

He has to get the mother in law...

The story is decent. But the sex scenes are just “we came”. That’s it. It’s boring.

My gosh take a course in English grammar

Sure wish my wife would share me with her sister

Nice story. Enjoyed it.

Really enjoyed this. Very believable. Well written. Good job.

Gives a new meaning to Sister Wives...

I LOVED IT...FIVE STARS!

Supposedly they do know. Women can spot the little things that change when a woman is having sex regularly. A little change in the posture, a bit brighter in the eyes as the better quality of sleep shows. Much easier to get good sleep when you’ve had an orgasm or two. ha! Relieves the stress and yoju are not tense trying to go to sleep. I don’t recall some of the others BEEN TOO LONG!