by tbunther
I thought it was good~ that foreign labor thing i dont even think is supposed to be taken seriously~ i think its just a prop-type thing to let you know he's having a boring/frustrating day at work~ Like if he said something like ~fucking copiers~
I agree, foreign labor comment is a boner killer. You have a great imagination and style, just leave out that shit and your stories will be HOT.
Really great story! Really makes me wish that I worked in an office like that!
you really lost me on that comment - it ain't the foreign labor, it's the bosses that chose to use it. can't get it up when you're pulling that kind of almost-racist crap.
The story is every office workers fantasy. You just put it into words. Thank you that was very hot!