All Comments on 'Laundry'

Well written, a believable story. If it didn't happen to you, it has happened to somebody.

i hope there is more

WOW!!! Nicely written and I enjoy how it slowly builds to an intense heat. I will enjoy the pleasurable thoughts of their future escapades! I would enjoy seeing this story continue, but it can’t be just sex. Business trip? Recreational trip? Why doesn’t she have tan lines? This is truly a wonderful story line that deserves to continue! (I Hope)

like it, hope you keep it going.

Don't like it. The main character is kind of a pathetic whiner who is pushy and needy at the same time. But the pacing and material is excellent.

Very well done. I like how you worked around to it. Very enjoyable.

That was a nice, HOT story. I think I'd love to live there with her.