All Comments on 'Laura and Rachel Meet Ch. 03'

More!!!!!!

Ch.04 plsss, i loved this one i liked how rachel got jealous and realized she loves laura not ron,, more of rachel and laura pls,, awesom job sweetie.. Can't wait for ch.04

That was pretty well but very short.. Make it longer next time if you don't mind coz i love your story :) it will be cute if you put some funny jealousy things between laura and rachel and also let us see rachel's view..i really wanna know how is her view about her decision and regrets.. You have all my intrest and attention.. Your story is my favourite now..

The story is sooo good but too short, more drama n a bit longer pleeeeaaase!

I agree my chapters are short and I apologize but I really try making them long I'm just not successful, I appreciate the comments, and I already submitted chapter 4

It might not be long and I'm sorry, but I'll put Rachel's view and all the jealous games I didn't mention in Laura's view, I hope that one is better.

oh you gonna put rachel's view?? Wow that's exactly what i was wanting it.. Let's see her view because its really confusing with her feelings to laura and ron and to see why she chose ron while she loves laura? Thumbs up for your story.. Loveeeee it

She wants Laura, but won't commit to her, then gets mad because she won't jump for joy at her crumbs?