All Comments on 'Laura's Fire'

Loved it!!

I would never guess US English wasn't your native language...Very nice story and well told

What a great story. I loved the characters and the premise of the story. I liked the flow and the interaction of the characters. The one thing I could not get was how could he afford to renovate his house when it was not mentioned if he had a job. Or did he have money from someplace else? Again, I loved the story. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Very believable.

There are many people who aren't beautiful or overly smart or witty or.... But there's a match for everyone somewhere. It's just hard to find that match sometimes and hard to recognize when you have found it. But you shouldn't assume that it's not there for you too. 5*

To the anonymous who wondered how Tommy could afford the renovation; his parents did die, maybe he inherited a little something beside the house?

And thanks everyone for the comments and ratings.

I have to say, I love all my characters but these two sorta grew on me. I think I’ll be posting something more of them later, so stay tuned if you liked them, too.

A work mate's girlfriend had a similar birthmark.

But she had the sweetest personality and seeing that lead to seeing how beautiful she was as well.

He was hook line and sinkered but I let him know not to leave her.

Now they are probably still together 45yrs on.

I like your characters and your plot. I seems like you have been writing a while but haven't published much or made your work available to others. Still, good character development. Here's a tip for future stories: if it is important to the story, get it in the story before it is important. If the time line didn't allow for something to happen, throwing a quick line that the character had prepared something earlier ruins the authenticity of the scene.

Keep writing, you are good and you will get better

detroitdave

Great story!

5

Has the exact same birthmark. In grade school the kids treated her horribly, as kids will do. I was a year older and became her protector and everyone knew to leave her alone. In High School she started wearing make up but in such a small school everyone already knew what she was hiding. Let me tell you, she is the most wonderful person, mother, grandmother, wife and sister that you can possibly ever imagine. She is loved and admired by everyone.

I really love your plot. I first read the story "breaking up and making up". That was the sequel of this story. So I starting to read all of the story connected to this. The problem is, I was confused which follows next so I accidentally read the "construction". When I started something, I don't like to be cut. So far, I really love your style.

Thank you for reading and thanks for your kind words, mrfox_stinger. I didn’t make Laura’s and Tommy’s tale into an actual series because it spread on so many categories. There’s an author’s note in the beginning of the sequels stating the chronological order.

You certainly seem to write from a place deep within. So much of erotica is lacking in these feelings and emotions that you pull out of your characters. That said, you also create settings that set a solid base for them to play out the story you've imagined. All together, like Anonymous said below; While you may be relatively new here on Literotica, the stories you've published here seem to show a more polished skill than a beginner and I think a lot of people will appreciate your contribution here.

Wow. You nudged straight into my soul before the story got started. I loved the twist that they were both writers. Very touching.

Sheer delight.

Of the 5 * ratings i keep giving you.

Thanks for the stories !

So much tenderness and empathy in your stories. Healing touch. Thank you.

Looking forward very much to the rest of the stories of these two in your "non-series".

good...

Your stories are simply the best. Warm, spellbinding and all sorts of wonderful. I’m sure you could write a romantic gangbang story :)

A bitch becomes a witch Charlene, the matchmaker ….. and those bullies, „simple minds“ at their best performances, onest a dummy it stays put ….. great Laura got her turn a round and made it down into Cleveland to confess her feelings …… so all in all a bumby road with an happy end

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌹

Outstanding! You capture the misery and hope of people marginalized for being different. I recalled:

“He drew a circle that shut me out-

Heretic, rebel, a thing to flout.

But love and I had the wit to win:

We drew a circle and took him In!”

― Edwin Markham

Really sweet and sadly realistic!, how blind people may be with their own emotions