All Comments on 'Laura's Indiscretion'

by creamsoda25

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maxx308maxx308over 1 year ago

So many unanswered questions left hanging. The story makes no sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Started really well - up to the cheating discovery and revenge fuck ... then I felt disappointed with the stereotype ending. No drama about possible reconciliations husband or lover) no emotions in fighting fo r kids ... nor any scenes giving husband second thoughts about controlling behavior - or lover about being a lazy cheater. All th characters seem to behave like black-and-white scetched. Some depth and evolvement would benefit both characters and story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Discovery, confrontation reasonable ending. I just love this one. Her regret is sauce to my soul.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good riddance to the cheating skank!!

kimmy2kimmy211 months ago

I agree this story make no sense at all, and what the husband did could be considered rape!!!

creamsoda25creamsoda2511 months agoAuthor

Yeah, sometimes you try things and they don't work. I might delete this one.

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