All Comments on 'Lauren Loves Dad'

Loved the premise and the sex was fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Loved it, but I thought it was over too soon! With a body like hers and chemistry like that, I found myself wanting more positions and more dirty talk. Nice job.

needed a lot more buildup but such a good start. sigh.

I enjoyed the story and the premise was good, but it was all over rather fast. I think you could've spent more time bringing the father and daughter together, and you certainly could’ve spent a lot more time devoted to the hot sex. If this girl had this impossibly hot body, there would certainly be scope to explore those curves in more detail again and again and again...

He needs to make sure she will be sporting a baby bump after the weekend

Baby bump,for sure

I loved the restaurant play, and the idea of another daddybeing in future stories. I’d love to have my daddy spend more time nibbling my clit and teaching me to deep throat. Please continue, I’ve stroked my clit sticky on this one twice...

That was great but to fast and too short.

Please write more! I think it needs at least 2 more chapters! ;) :) Keep up the great work!

Need more foreplay and don't rush it so much! Have all the time in the world. Good storyline.

Great story! Please make it a series. Maybe in the next part Lauren tease her Daddy. - A

Did like your 'window reflection' view.

Love the story, but things just happen too quick. It's almost like he is treating her like a whore. I guess you write these as whack off stories. Your reader could be male or female and you just want to get us off.

I thought the window reflection added a great voyeuristic element to your story. I agree with some of the other comments that a slower build-up would have been nice too. But then again, if you were writing for spank bank material - mission accomplished! Thanks for the story!

Awesome!!!

"Lauren Loves Dad:" - Nineteen Year Old Co-Ed Virgin, Lauren and Forty Year Old Separated Father, Del.

I've read each of the writer's stories in their alphabetical order. This is the first story of blood-kin incest that had some romance, tenderness and seemingly real love-feelings for the incest pairings. As most comments have alluded, this story is quite short, with an almost "wham-bam" plot. This story does have some character to it that is missing in more of the writer's stories. I've really a love affair with Lauren and her father' tenderness and respect for each other. Accolades; great story--but too short, too quick.

Really Hot!

It made me think of my wife and her dad, if such a thing had ever happened. Of course, she had a lot of pussy hair which would have appealed to him. Plus, she is voluptuous, too. She was his baby girl and was at home with him for a few years after college. And, she knew about his impressive manhood, having seen it up close on a number of occasions.

sure when I read the story about the son sending nude pictures to his mother she has a moral dilemma and 4 pages BUT when its a daughter sending pics to daddy, we get 2 pages and he is such a horn dog he just whips out his dick in public places and no moral dilemmas...LOL just kidding

Actually it was a wonderful story. You added a little twists about the mysterious boy.

I really enjoyed it

Thank you

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Sexciting tale !

So hot it made me drip.

Wonderful story! Now have him get her ready for sex in the room and then guide her out onto the balcony to take her on the railing overlooking downtown. When she's 8 months pregnant?