All Comments on 'Laurie's Beach Encounter'

Excellent, LOVE Laurie's transformation. Looking forward to reading more of the NEW Laurie.

Loved this story. Very hot and very sexy. More please?

cheating whore stories suck

I like the name Deeannan montana - lol

Nice, hope he finds her again and they take another round on the rocks

I don't know, what with spelling errors and how he sucked her nipples when he was behind her it seemed like this was a copy and paste. Still arousing tho

Hot story

boy i hope there will be more of this story

Good story! A bit short and quick for you, but erotic and fun to read. I would love to see it continued.

Okay!

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What no flooding of his cum in her married tight pussy, no condom, unprotective raw sex???

Good story. Can't wait to read more.

Ignore the negative comments, keep writing. I love the theme, they know what it’s about so no complaints, just stop reading. Great story as all yours are. Another please.

A great story, thank you for sharing. Sure there were spelling and grammar errors, shows you’re an amateur writer, like me, it what made your story better, not worse. This is a site for amateur stories, anyone expecting professional writings needs to look elsewhere. And your last sentence explaining this was a collaborative effort with another author explains the mistake of sucking her nipples when she was supposedly on her knees. I will definitely read more of your writings, and look forward to new stories from you.

Love it. Great work!

Best ‘Fuck story’ I have read.