All Comments on 'Lava Lake'

by Talusmanic

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MariMackenzieMariMackenziealmost 5 years ago
Amazing!

This was really sexy! I noticed a few minor errors that an editor could fix, but besides that I loved this story. It really got me going ;)

TalusmanicTalusmanicalmost 5 years agoAuthor
RE: Amazing!

Thanks, MariMackenzie! Glad you enjoyed it. I can probably get a few of the errors fixed up. I hope you enjoy some of my future submissions.

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I just like to write feel-good, sexy stories. Nothing violent or uncomfortable. I'm always interested in feedback, and love to get other perspectives.