All Comments on 'Lawless Liberty Ch. 01'

A nice start. You have me interested. I like the lead in and the characters. You have done a good job on getting me interested in the next chapter. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Normally, I don't like the mixed perspectives and timelines, but its done well here. Keeps story flow easy and focuses sequentially on three lead persons. Now we know town and family of the ex virgin girl (Karen?), the revengeful killer lady Liberty and bank guy Justin.

How is it going forward? Introduction done and "normal" single point of view only? Staying with those 3 leads and continuing to switch POVs between them? Or adding new perspectives? Hope it doesn't get too confusing

Great start, and I love westerns! Love the horny small town hottie, gives up her cherry to the handsome sheriff. Now we have another young lady as a desperado, what's not to like? Well written, and looking forward to much more! Five stars!

You are off to a good start. As a western fan I really enjoyed your story's mix of drama and background story. I'll definitely check for updates.

Excellent start - looking forward to reading your next chapter.

Your opening had al the right elements - descriptive writing, well drawn characters and a fast moving believable plot.

Thank you

I'm not only happy to see a new story from you, but I'm excited to see you branch into a new genre. Westerns can be a lot of fun, and I like the characters you've started the story off with. Looking forward to more.

Love a good western and this one is starting off well.

A bit strange story, but am hooked. Want to see how this story plays out with these characters.