All Comments on 'Lawn Doctor'

It is a very good read, realistic (sort of), good humor, and a good end...... I see you have written only four... please more ;-)

but they are resourceful and frugal. TK U MLJ LV NV

It isn't the typical LW story, but it certainly had a moral. Some of it was a bit of a stretch, but the main point was very real. Thanks for the time and effort needed to present this to us readers.

WOW! That was a fantastic read. Loved everything about it. Thank you for sharing with us. %

You and your ideas!! Great job man. Excellent story. ^

original indeed.. Very nice.

What a great story. I wish that I could give it 20 stars.

Ole Lucy and her magical vagina. %^

Great stuff.... Especially the judging people lesson. Thanks for sharing.

Blow jobs with no seed?? Sounds like diet coke to me..

I think this would be good entry for the contest.

Good story, great jokes!

Top score from me.

We'd all like even mow!

This has got to be one of the funniest stories I've read in Literotica for quite a while. And the punch line with the names of the 4 women was right on the money. Certainly a 5* effort and a good finish to my hour or so on this site.

As I'm in my twilight years also, this is a story I can relate to.

Excellent & Hilarious

Great job.faith hope and charity . Well done

Wish it were true. Hopefully for some it is.

Oh, the lame corny humor was a distraction for me.

What a great tale. No outrageous drama and plenty of humor. Excellent!

Five Stars

betrayed!

Very nice!

Good stuff.

Very different from the usual LW story and the humour sprinkled through it made it very readable.

NewEndings, your biog note says "Mundane life". Fortunately it's not a mundane imagination.

Lue

and then Lucy.

It was moving and it made me grin, too, so that's a real winner.

This story was so funny. I laughed so hard. Being elderly myself I could really identify with Joe. It is also a very touching story. I'll bet both Lucy and Joe have mischievous twinkle in their eyes.

It is very inspiring. It give us Hope for the future Very funny also. *****

. . . it. 5

I just got around to reading one of your stories, this one! Will be reading some of the others for sure. Well written and told, in my opinion. Loved it. Emotional, sad, up lifting, witty, and funny. I think you hit every one spot on. We seniors like a good read and this was one.

5*+

5*

3rd time i have read this story. I really love it so much.. Hoping you continue writting. Great works.

This was a joy to read. Thank you.

4-stars

cutting edge stuff... very frugal with the sex scenes!

LOVED IT 5*****

First you needlessly made me do math

Second, this isnt loving wives

He is not married, unless I missed it none of the women he is fucking are married,

and even if one were LW is from the point of view of a cheater rubbing it in, or the cheated upon, or swingers, ect Point is you have a dedicated relationship with sex on the side

Story itself was good

But this should be in EC, possibly romance, or fetish given you have a nearly 80 year old man boning virtual teenagers

Great little bit of humorous fluff! High Marks for that!