by shaunreagh
Wonderful writing and a hot story, as always, Shaun -- nobody does the "I know I shouldn't but ohhhhhh I can't help myself" story line as well as you! I'm looking forward to Chapter 2.
Great to see another excellent story along the lines of the Staunton genre. A woman who knows she shouldn't but convinces herself it's for a higher morality is always tough to write, but as always you do it well. Hopefully you will not only continue this tale, but also add to the plight of the fair maiden in the Staunton series. Both story lines are excellent, well written and totally entertaining. Keep up the great work..
Your stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!
Okay, that was so fucking hot. I especially loved the woman's voice here. Excellent work, looking forward to your other stories. :)
you take 2 pages in preliminaries where 2 paragraphs would suffice. I lost interest.
Shame you have such a short attention span - you missed out!
Nice build up......Now I would like a Chapter 2. ...Nicely written.....
Saint Stephen
Jeez...does anybody on this site know the difference between a desert and dessert? I beginning to think not!