All Comments on 'Lawyer, Lawyer Pt. 01'

Even science fiction needs to be grounded in SOMETHING plausible. This "story" isn't. Besides being about as erotic as a bad head cold, this thing is so poorly written one wonders how it got past the website editors.

“Harry Potter and the Assisted Living Community of Forgenroth.” This cracked me up so badly I shot coffee through my nose which splattered dead center on the monitor of my computer –now my sons want me to repeat the event.

I liked most of this story. It was funny, charming, the dialogue was priceless. But I could not fully enjoy the story because I was not familiar with the living dolls series. I must correct this oversight...

Jane Doe

Yeesh, even here in the comments section we are not safe from random Catholic terrorist pornographer attacks: "no you can't have strokage validation, not yours"... LOL

MarshAlien, you got me. how the HELL do the living dolls gain sentience? Come on buster, this next edition is awesome.

Aw, what a sweet thing to say. Snif. That was so nice o' you! Keen to see how the story ends. :) ~~~L8.

I especially liked 'kissing the John Paul George Ring-o'...very imaginative and funny.

I really like this story and would love to read the first one but "Living Dolls" is most definitely not available.....

Call me romantic but the idea of Karen being fucked by Andy after everything is just ubsurd. I loved the original series btw.

Fun, smart, and a guy who acts like a real guy and doesnt treat his women like disobedient horses. Well, at least not the live ones. ; )

"1*" !!

Thank you. 5*****

Perfect way of ruining a very good story that is Living Dolls

Is there supposed to be a difference between a liar and a lawyer?

WTF dude! Everything was going swell and then you had to just fuck it up. Why didja have to bring Andy into the mix?? This just sucks giant-hairy-balls.

Where the heck is "Living Dolls" located? I found "The Director's Cut", but apparently that's not enough of a background well to really understand the dolls. Anyone got a clue, please? Thank you!

The author removed chapter one from the free sites and has it up for sale.

Hard to understand why the rest was left here, since it is not easy to get into the middle of a story not knowing the background.

Awesome story until you turned his wife into a worthless slut and him into the most worthless crap on the planet, a cuck.

So after everything Andy did Karen allowed him to fuck her in the ass first instead of her husband? Oh yeah did I mention that she's married? And adding to that her husband also fucked Julie? This is definitely correct that it's in the LW section

Absolute shit

1*

Wish I could give it a big fat 0

One of the worst stories i have read here... This really was a mess... Plot devices were just thrown willy nilly simply to get to some implausible point the author wanted to reach... This was all over the place... And the creepy sex thrown at the end was just disgusting not to mention unrealistic....

-jaye-

Some anonymous people just lack a sense of humor. MarshAlien....my favorite.

It's hard to believe that this is the same author that wrote the amazing story about reg and company... this story has none of the talent that story possessed... and for the record... the only thing more ridiculous than this story... is the ridiculous culture here of anon vs member... it's stupid... we are all here anonymous... I doubt very seriously that the author is actually a marsh alien... the insults leveled towards those that don't wish to become members is really juvenile... and hurling insults towards others simply because their literary tastes are different than yours... is pretty moronic...

-jaye-

Interesting story so far.

Nice try.

Loving it!

This is obviously a parallel universe, and you're having fun with the ridiculous, so I won't bother pointing out the factual inconsistencies, such as Britney's age.

Looks like "Living Dolls" isn't available, so I'm hoping that "Living Dolls: The Director's Cut" is the same story.

Keep up the great work! 👍

Or maybe I should say "Get back to work!" since there's nothing from you on Literotica since 08/30/08, almost 13 years ago! Are you publishing elsewhere?

I'm sorry, I didn't rate this because I got completely lost by the second page. I did love your going fishing story though,

Verbose and boring.

GREAT !!!!!!

i’m so confused

The gold standard for this genre is, of course, the Ted Mark (Theodore Gottfried) Man From O.R.G.Y. series. This one is fun so far even if it tries a little too hard with the funny bits.

Kooky. Almost surprisingly gentle humor to accompany the twisted narrative. Not sure entirely of my specific opinion but liked it a lot.

Maybe weirdly prescient too. Bet Sen. Spears ain’t singin’ songs off Station to Station no more.