All Comments on 'Layers Ch. 04'

This series is awesome, all I have to say about it, other than the very occasional spelling/grammar issue, but you have fewer than most other authors

Thanks! I have to admit - this is a brain dump story. It's been a while since I've written anything and I was feeling rusty so this is my exercise to get back into shape. I'm spending about 4 hours or so per chapter and just skimming for grammar and spelling. Poor form but I need to get back into things.

One more chapter to go!

it's been quite awhile since i've read a story that is just...so good. 5 stars, too bad i can't give more :p

This set of stories has been great! I hope you choose to continue this story!

Thank you! I just submitted chapter 5 so as soon as it's approved...

You know this guy is a fucking bitch. He goes on a website looking for dick. Then gets mad when they reply. "Ah. I see. Most guys are assholes and are just looking to get some". Bitch you are doing the exact same thing. hahaha. In short this guy is man-hating, vain bitch. I was really hoping he would change back into his fat gross original body. Right in front of the couples.

Lycandope, if this is "brain dump" writing that you're a hella good writer. Keep up the good work.