All Comments on 'Le Bon Voyage'

Great job, Jackie! Once again, you have produced an incredibly well written, yet beautifully erotic story!

A really find, well written story! ... Shades of Edith Piaf, Jingo Rhinehart at their very best.

... Love the nod to geography: the Hudson Bay, Greenland, Auexrre -- the Burgundy country side.

... I always find (well written) F/F stories interesting ... but they don't 'ring my bells'. This one did: because of it's universality; a 'human' story.

... And, it is fuckin' hot! You have a wicked mind! ... You can be sure that I will go back and read your other stuff!

Tail_Gunner AKA Levi Coldwater

Jackie …. First a wonderful 2024 with happiness health lucky moments ☘️💝 …. I just listened to “Sade” the best of, starting reading your tale, what a perfect coincidence ….. and yes rarely happened a lifetime you someone absolutely special extraordinary out of the normal range and then let take over the intuition before the brain chaos damages all …. 😃 maybe the one thousand euro will bring her faster to Auxerre then the black mercedes ….. and im sure the university in Auxerre holds a perfect fitting match plan for Roz to study there …. So the next chapter im waiting for impatiently

A wonderful beginning 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨☘️

I re read Roz previous encounters and this third confirms the pattern

First times. Fresh exciting and yet scary first times.

Nice and erotic story to beguin 2024. Congrats

Loved it! The mesmerizing predator, the aware prey, the arousal, the surrender -- just perfect!

You are such a writer. "The curls of her hair were as soft as her accent. Her neckline, a violin. Even her eyelashes were frickin' hot."

This was a wonderful story, with a great ending.

Elegant and very well written. Merci.

Oh so many bonus points for Jaques Selosses. Brought back memories of when we drank it so oftent we referred to it as Jack Shellac.

Beautifully written story.

Please please chapter 2!! We have to know what happens in Auxerre!!!

Your writing is always a delight to read! More please…

Jackie, thank you for an amazing story! There are few works that move me like this one, that make me sad that I can’t read the “rest of the story” right now, and that make me exited with anticipation for the day when I can. You are a rare talent, Thank you too for the suggestion to read the works of onehitwanda. I can’t wait to read more of your work, and to explore the work of your friend. Thank you again, and take care.

Wonderfully written and paced.

Hopefully not the last of Roz's adventures?

Merci

Thank you for yet another fine story, dying to find out what those beautiful creatures Roz and Lisette get up to next, so hopefull it's onward to Paris and Auxerre, please.

Very well told. If I was a young woman I would have really enjoyed that young woman's experience.

As a guy with a voyeur kink, this scenario was right up my alley. Love your style, you tell a great story.

I'm assuming there will be more?

Looking forward to reading more from you as I can.

My first exposure to your body of work. You are a very talented and insightful author. Your command of the English language is exceptional.

I look forward to delving more deeply.

5 stars.

Very good written, please go on with a sequel and thank you very much for sharing.

Loved it! You have a way with words that I wish I had. Looking forward to more. 5 stars!

A very well written story 5* You have a wonderful way with words :)

Very glad I followed Onehitwanda's recommendation and would love to read what happens in Auxerre

Outstanding, Jackie. Yes Roz has to go to Auxerre. Would love to read another installment or two! K xxx

Very enjoyable. You have a graceful style. The pace of the seduction was just right. It's got me wondering what will happen next.

Another great story. The way you write dialog is amazing! Thank you so much.

It evoked Paris and adventures. Please write more.