by BreakTheBar
This is spicing up in a great way. The anticipation is building. Easy five stars
I love the intricate games going down on several different levels simultaneously. It must be a bitch to write something like this. I really like it and appreciate your writing skills. Thanks
A good story, but there's some so Boomer (for lack of a better work) about thinking identifying the ethnicity of an Asian girl and maybe a sentence in a language she may or may not know puts her under your power like some kind of Rumpelstiltskin story
Another nice chapter, thank you BTB.
To the anonymous Boomer commenter below: if you think that the phrase you pointed out is all that went on, either you should spend a little more effort to understand what you are reading or you are just eager to get offended. One of those two takes is, in itself, offense.