All Comments on 'Le Plaisir de Trevail'

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smidgeonsmidgeonabout 16 years ago
Very hot

That was an amazingly hot little story. Well crafted and well written. Kudos :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A most Romantic tension filled realistic story

Well written with great tension and in need of a sequel

lochtonlochtonabout 16 years ago
Great stuff!

More please! Very well done!

lochtonlochtonabout 16 years ago
Great stuff!

More please! Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
greattttt story

Was looking for chapter 2 of "Guerison Sexuelle" when I decided to read this submission..Very well written and kept

my interest... Looking forward to more of your writting..

RedHead*MuseRedHead*Museabout 16 years ago
Please ~ Don't Stop!

Ohhh Ohhh OHHHhh! More, we all want more, s'il vous plait! Please continue this wonderfully written story, Soon!

Executive GentExecutive Gentalmost 16 years ago
Wonderful Story Telling

I thought it was wonderfully written, I so hope you find a way of continueing their story, both characters have such life and vitality, it would be such a shame for them to sleep and not be woken up again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A fine story

Well developed and well written story. I enjoyed it very much. One comment: shouldn't the title read "Le plaisir du Travail"? or is there on pun there that I am missing? ;-)

Hope to read more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another Chapter

There has to be a conclusion to this, greatly written.

RhomanovRhomanovalmost 11 years ago
Impressive

Very well done.

Thx

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Started well, but

Then moved far too quickly. Just a fantasy.

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