All Comments on 'Lead Me Not Ch. 01'

Well written but very disturbing.

very erotic

Ahahaha makes me want to play with Adem again. Seriapi says he is game -giggles- Wonderful as always my love.

~Mew

A very interesting and sexy story line. Please continue its development with the same detailed description.

I love it. Can you add some anal sex and maybe give Haden a possibility to be redeemed and released from hell?

...does this continue elsewhere? It really should, I want to read more. How will Haden rise to his assignment? How will Adem make him suffer? It's like an erotic Angel Sanctuary, eep! I am a fan. Write faster!! *cracks the whip*

...does this continue elsewhere? It really should, I want to read more. How will Haden rise to his assignment? How will Adem make him suffer? It's like an erotic Angel Sanctuary, eep! I am a fan. Write faster!! *cracks the whip*

Part two is somewhat written, but I've honestly lost my ambition for it. Being in the middle of a full-length non-erotic novel drains me for these little side projects. But I'll do what I can for you guys. Thanks for the comments and support.

It's a great start and i really want to know what exactly Haden did, and what he's gonna do. Pls write more!

I love your demon Adem... He sounds so sexy and dominating... Keep up the good work and I hope there'll be another of it... I want the Haden and Adem pair in the other story... =)

continue with the story.