by PassionStJohn
I really like this story and the other ones before it. I hope you keep it up I can't wait to read what happens next.
i have enjoyed this series from you except that i am kind of disappointed that he took her the way he did.... he didn't seem the type to take her virginity with her almost unconscious.... he took such care of her up til then... it is only my personal opinion but how wonderful to have had her stuggle and panic as she watched him undress... have her see the power of him.. bow to his yield... darn.. oh well i look forward to the continuing of the series and see where it goes.. Jane
I loved how he brought out the cum-slut in her!!!! Anyways, it is a story where she is also learning to be her true self - hope the story gets better! Keep writing! I hate the slave-trade theme though!
So awesome...this subbie needs a good fucking RIGHT NOW! I love it!!!!!!
Great story and good character development but you lost me with the old "endless orgasms" that always seem to have to crop up in these stories. I prefer a bit more realism and that just wouldn't happen with the amount of fear she has.
She was a prized virgin.
"He thrust into her in one stroke" --- without mention of her being deflowered.
Surprised you missed that. Rather large error.
You can be a virain without a hymen. It is very common these days actually
Riding bikes, horses, using tampons wrong. . .