by flashgordon562006
Good so far. Short and to the point, but needs fleshing out (excuse the pun) of the characters a little more.
Also, canned goods survive well past any expiry date (they found tinned goods in Antarctica from the expedition in 1912 that were still edible). I do so dislike this over emphasis on "sell by", "use by" and "expiry date" - nothing can replace taste and smell.
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This might be one of the best back stories that you have come up with. I like that he ate her multi creampied puss.