by tzael2003
mom needs to get dad back.so she can dom both son and him.making them do her bidding together for her pleasure.especially since both are muscle guys.making them get into some bi for her pleasure.
The stories from 01 to 05, get hot but until the end, there is some penetration, boooo! Like another reader wrote, you need the father so he can be fucked by a real dick. Also, he could develop into a cross dresser in the second chapter, when he was using moms panties, but the author let it go, too bad.
Well, it was a nice start. Too bad you've decided to unexpectedly change directions for the worse. Good luck with all that.
I think that it a great idea that the mom has a strap on thing going on. to put all of these new people into the story so quickly ruin the character development between the mom and the son. maybe if the stories keep going, new people can be introduced. i really hope that you keep writing and im looking forward to all of your future stories. thanks.
women and wimps then I thought. And how they do love anal just like the gay group they are a part of.
very very good and the only critism i would have would be that they are too short.
my pussy gushes when i read about a totally masculine muscle husband being dom by a hot pussy wife.and when their muscle son is a part of mom's cuckholding husband/dad that is so hot.forget crossdressing men yuck.tell us hot pussies about big muscle men being under wife's direction which includes muscle son being serviced by cuckhold dad.
In the other 4 chapters I gave you a 100%.. I like a good Mother & Son story, but, now that I see where this is going I MAY read some of your next chapter to see how you progress... I wouldn't hold my breath though. you are a very good writter though, keep writting...
Paul