All Comments on 'Learning to Let Go'

5 stars.

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I love a good love story, and this had everything I might reread it again but I will try not to skip pages 3-6 this time, a lesson to be learned is never forget to tell the one you love how you feel, because there will come a time when that person is no longer there

I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to more of your writing.

For a first story, I thought it was marvellous. My one, very small criticism would be that you rushed the first part of the story a little bit. Having said that though, the rest of it slowed down and that made a big difference. A great story that I enjoyed very much! Keep writing. I look forward to more from you!!

omg omg, the best story I've read in ages, you are simply delicious !

will be looking for more of your work

carrie

As per title - I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it

First submission and it's just great! Very good story, great dialogue and continuity- good job.

Thanks and hope to see more soon

I enjoyed your story tremendously. I liked how the story moved with the main characters feelings. In the beginning you felt the fear, anxiety, and loss of the characters mood. However as the story moved further and the characters feelings changed you felt the passion, love, fear, and hope in the mood of Rebecca. I look forward to reading another submission.

A longer story, especially one which is bound by emotion, is much harder to write than the small sex actions tied together with a bit of dialogue. Your style and pace were perfect for the telling of the story and the breadth of locations did not spoil the characterisations and the emotional constituents. I thought the love making scenes were really well written and captured the sensuality of them.

I am sure that if you were writing this again, your balance of plot to the minutiae of some of the scenes would alter and it would probably be shorter, but I think this is just an organic thing that will happen as you become even more competent. Alison x

I read the comments before the story, but I found this to be really tedious to get through. The dialogue was more cheesy romantic bargain bin movie, instead of realistic thoughtful conversations. Though a lot happened, I never connected with any of the characters and the sex scenes felt forced more then fluid. Like when they slap an obligatory sexual moment into a movie because they think it has to be there. There was no build up, and suddenly bam. Then they are in love.

The perfect pace and such a beautiful story.

Loved this story from start to finish.

Very enjoyable read. My only negative feedback is a proof read would have caught some minor errors. Interesting characters and an excellent story. Hope you treat us to more stories. 5 stars. Thank you.

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I loved the well thought out story line and the underlying concept. It had several orgasm-inducing sex scenes so very well described. I have read several lit erotica sex stories but this one is THE best, and also the first one I had an orgasm reading. You are really talented! Keep writing, 5 stars from me...

Please write more.

I didn't want it to end! You did such a fantastic job! Loved the characters and story! Thanks so much!

I couldn't wait to read on. This story caught my attention right from the beginning. Great job on everything.

Awesome. Great characters and story. Loved it.

Very well written; an outstanding story. Looking forward to more of your work; please don't be a "one-hit wonder".

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Enjoyed the story from start to finish so much so that I could not put it down. Please continue your writing as I am sure you have much more to give. Thank you for your hard work and, hopefully, your future efforts.

Wonderfully written, pulling on all of my heartstrings! And some very naughty bits too! Thank you!

A well written, beautiful story. The emotions perfectly described, allowing the reader to feel them too. I'm looking forward to your next story.

I love it but I want to know whets in the other box.

I'm reminded of a book called "As long as love remembers." Unashamedly romantic and sentimental. Thank you.

10 out of ten, shame I can only give 5 out of 5 stars lol.

So much emotion and raw sex in the right amounts.

Oh my god, this must have been the most beautiful story I've ever read on here - too bad I couldn't rate it with more than these 5 stars!!!!!! I got completely lost in it

I can't wait to read more of your stories - very well done!!!👏🏽

I "never" read things twice, OK sometimes the first time and the last time, but to actually, really read the same story two times is pretty much out of the question. Never happened today and never was ever so nice.

This story is based on a topic that gets me everytime, someone suffers the loss of a loved one then let's someone new and finds piece and falls in love. This one though does something truly magical. It not only contains a bunch of mind blowing sex, but also delves into some of the forgotten details. Such as, friends also suffering from the loss of the loved one, how some people are there own worst enemies, and especially the different aspects of the families on both sides. Will definitely be rereading this lovely story.

....... that I could actually believe it was a true story.

A story involving a sudden death and a second chance at love can seem so trite, but you avoided all of the pitfalls.

This is the second time I have read this story, and there is a reason why I didn`t post a comment till now.

I wanted to wait a few months then reread it, just to make sure I was correct in my first thoughts on your tale.

Sadly I speak from experience on this subject as my wife of only 3 years passed away a long, long time ago. I pushed more than a few people away instead of letting go, and allowing a new (NEVER a replacement!!) person to get close to me.

We have been together almost 30 years now, but I still love 2 women, each for their own qualities and imperfections.

A fabulous take on a difficult subject :)

Reading the story again (at least four times now) and it's still great. I keep coming back to your page hoping you've added more stories. All of yours are terrific.

Another beautiful story and again, your writing is excellent. You are in my favorites and I'll be watching for more from you. Thanks!

CaroSoft this is a wonderful story I have read a few times and would like to know if they get married and do they have children as they are so loving and a couple that did not want to be apart so I await your next chapter thank you for a very loving beautiful story. xxx

I’m a sucker for a happy ending! Well done

Wow, it's good to see a story in this category about a woman who gets her happy ever after in a monogamous relationship with another woman without feeling the need to abandon her bi identity. That's as common as unicorn dung afaict.

Aw wow, what an amazing story. I really loved this, thanks for writing it :) xx

I really loved the story! Very touching!

A loving and lovely story.

A beautiful story