by MissesSpanky
Welcome, new author, and thank you for this opening chapter of what I am sure will be a fine story. I enjoyed it enormously. Please have five stars and bring us chapter 2 soon!
A good start, and well written so far, but only a start. I gave a 4 as encouragement to continue.
MissesSpanky, that was a good start. The pieces are set. But where is the rest?