All Comments on 'Learning to Please Him Ch. 01'

by MissesSpanky

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
A good start!

Welcome, new author, and thank you for this opening chapter of what I am sure will be a fine story. I enjoyed it enormously. Please have five stars and bring us chapter 2 soon!

DeGrinchDeGrinchover 9 years ago
Don't quit!

A good start, and well written so far, but only a start. I gave a 4 as encouragement to continue.

ertrilertrilover 9 years ago
very hot

this was so good i cant wait to read the nxt one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good start

MissesSpanky, that was a good start. The pieces are set. But where is the rest?

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