by TheAlenaArchives
This is a wonderful story. I was hard all the way through. Keep writing please. I love it❤️
An absolute white-hot erotic gem, with subtle touches of description and dialogue that raise the heat, paragraph by paragraph. I love how you build the story, carefully, taking your time, constructing this fully realized sexual world, so scintillating for being anchored in reality. Your gift has given us a gift. Thank you!
Great story, well written. Suggest you get it proof read next time to pick up a few odd tense changes. Love ‘rampid’ - you should look up what they say about the word in the Urban Dictionary. Suffice to say there is no such word. Hope you write more as I enjoy your style. Thanks
Enjoyable tale, though the end was perhaps a little rushed. Her feelings throughout were well expressed and I felt her erotic excitement and enjoyment. Thanks