All Comments on 'Leather & Lace Ch. 02'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

Persistence pays off!

5

linnearlinnearover 1 year ago

Absolutely love this story and part one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Strange lack of reaction to learn she was married.

No initial question of why five years.

I guess her mention of limo was taken as a joke?

Such a long wait between stories for very little in return.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Short and sweet! A fitting ending to Chapter 1. I liked it.

Cheers

SAGE

acupacupover 1 year ago

There is another chapter coming a little sooner isn't there?

DesertRat681DesertRat681over 1 year ago

Very nice chapter 2! Hopefully there’s more!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed the first chapter, but a little annoyed you left us in a trailer in an oil field with part 2. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

typos, malaprops. too many to list. still read it...

Crusader235Crusader235over 1 year ago

Yes sir, we're certainly glad she found him again. Now please give us the rest of their story. 5*****

ker63469ker63469over 1 year ago

I'm loving this story. Please tell me there is another chapter soon.....

teedeedubteedeedubover 1 year ago

So, we wait another 15 years for chapter 3? I bet you had a lot of fun with this and, well, it was worth the wait.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Got us wound up and turned on - again - after more than 5 years!

Then Boom and we went off to nowhere's land - again!

We need more - again!

Hopefully more in weeks or months - and not years?????

Were in the middle of an awesome Beginning and To The Moon And Back - Forever And Ever ending!

We need, and we need it NOW!!!!!

We are would tight, and one touch of the right word in the right place and we go Boom right to the ending!!!!!!!!

Campus77Campus776 months ago

OK, my usual comment. No ending. There is sooo much to explain and explore left out of these two chapters. Seems to be a trend of yours. A love lost and found tale that really brings one in to feel part of the story. A prequel wouldn't work, but more would be appreciated.

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