by adaurora
Great update! Some really nice developments, and questions for the next chapter. Can't wait to read the next one!
This chapter was a vast improvement from the first; it moves a lot slower (which I enjoyed) and the details really make it more relatable. I am really interested in reading about what happens with Eve and Gabriel. Don't make us wait too long!
You are a lovely writer. I am excited to see how their relationship progresses. This is an intriguing story and I hope to see more asap! Thanks for sharing.
a sweet, smart, sexy story!! well done...i can't wait to find out what happens!! i think that's the best compliment i can give!! i love your style...i already know what the main characters look like in my mind...Hugh Jackman and Anne Hathaway...
Loved it!!
You have to continue with this story! They're really hot together and I can't wait to find out more about the girl who called and his daughter!! Although I do have a feeling about them... Anyways, this is a really great story and I can see it becoming even better as the chapters progress! Don't keep us waiting too long ;)