All Comments on 'Leaving... Ch. 01'

Bravo, thank you very much, I throughly enjoyed the whole story.

I was rather hoping to know just why she was flying to tell him goodbye.

I assume she did something she shouldn't have! And figures he couldn't forgive her.??

I put my name in the comment that came out as 'anonymous in Chi USA'.

Anyway---I agree with statements.

Excellent effort so far. Can't wait for the next chapters.

A brilliant love story, so far - but with the shadow over us that she is flying out to say 'goodbye'. I guess we're all hoping that there'll be a twist to change that...

Lukas

I especially appreciated the little details that take the place of exposition. You showed, and that is often missing on this site.