All Comments on 'Leaving the Nest Ch. 01'

You have the beginning of a great story. Looking forward to reading the future interaction of mother and son. Also, what you decide to do with Bruno and his sister.

Both? Lucky guy!

I like it ... keep on with this story line. It's well paced and promises to have a very erotic encounter between mother and son.

Your story so far has a good mix of humour, appeal, anticipation rather than suspense, and the pace of the story makes for expectation of high interest that leaves one waiting for the next episode. Character descriptions are used to good effect.