All Comments on 'Left at the Altar'

To the point that it's actually pretty hard to read.

is hidden somewhere in here. Please rewrite it and try to uncover it. Still 3 *.

I just could not get into this story, but it was written good.

You have skill. Keep writing.

...but the long dialogue has killed the mood so next time, please focus on writing full sexual scenes and try to describe what both of them feel , besides there has to be some intimacy in the dialogue because the chats seem so regular , that I imagined it being two girls at a café and not in a hotel room on their wedding night.. 3* from me :)

I see people talking about how this is overwritten...and full of dialogues...

Trust me...I look for dialogues more than sexual part. So I loved it. It's well written. Keep writing

come to find out Rob had set up the whole thing with his fiance and her best friend so Rob knew what was going on in the beginning but that's what he wanted because he was tired of Lacey and she thought she left him at the altar he actually left her cuz the two women that they had a threesome with all wanted it Rob so I Rob ended up with the two women he left his wife left his fiance because she was not worth the 2 other women so in the end Rob won and didn't lose

Great sex does not lead to good marriages, but good marriages do lead to great sex.

And fight it if you want, but Lesbians are the least sexy of any type of couple. That's why most Lesbian slut stories are written by men. Not real.

Don't tell the sex - describe the sex. The story itself reminded me of an 80s cheesy comedy.