All Comments on 'Left to Wonder...For Twenty Years'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful story!

Glad you got Kimber and Mark together! Glad they have slept together and made gentle love -- as she rubs her hand along his hairy right thigh, can she also trace her hand across his hairy pecs and chest? I can understand that he's not a hunk of muscle-bound stature, but as a man of average good looks, can he have sexy chest hair? Love them together! Please write chapter 2.

dani_lrlmdani_lrlmover 4 years ago
Love your stories.

With you sex - no, love - is always something positive. Thank you for your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You wrote about poetry

But spoiled it with scrap editing?

Why bother?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Better invite Mrs. Richmond to the wedding!

Wouldn't have happened without her.

Lovely story

*****

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 4 years ago

A beautiful story beautifully told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Crappy fashion sense

I liked the story, but the images of their outfits at the reunion are terrifyingly burned in my brain.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Spot On! Again?!!!

You're reminding me...when I looked at our elementary school class photo...

and remembered which girl I had sent an anonymous valentine?

I realized I had made the wrong choice! :+))))

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Nice story. AAAA+++

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

What a lovely story. Well done 5 stars

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