All Comments on 'Legal Affair'

...set that to music and you might have a hit. And wasn't poor Helen unlucky with her family. But then, Rachel's family make up for that. Good to see you back, Sandy, with a very good story, nicely erotic where it should be. I think there were odd things that could have been strengthened a little, for example you could have squeezed a bit more drama from the loathsome Roger. Still, that's just a small point. Please don't be offended by this but I think Legal Affair is better than your 'Milly' stories, it's more polished in its presentation. Here are five stars to encourage your efforts in the future.

I have loved every story you have written. I look forward to all of your new stories so much. The way you build them up with their backstories makes it feel as though they are old friends. Please keep up the good work.

Thank you for a brilliant story.

I have enjoyed all of your stories, however "Legal Affair" just seemed very special for me. All story telling aspects were perfect in this "well written" romance story, and when the sexual activity finally kicked in it was "absolutely breathtaking". Rachel arriving at Helen's house 30-minutes early, immediately dropping her dress, and then instructing Helen "to Ravish her", was majestically mind-blowing!

An Astonishingly Great Story = 5*-Stars Rating!!!!!!!!!

Sandy I read the entire Milly Scott series awhile back. I ached at times but I like that you color outside the lines when it comes to relationships. I might have to read it all again. I appreciate that you also suggested a reading sequence which is helpful.

In regard to Legal Matter I loved your characters and storyline but thought the dialogue that went the sex was a little thin. Not quite as erotic as your earlier writing. It felt rushed. I do think however other than that for me aside from that criticism you deserve 5 stars. I think I could have done that and wish I had. Keep writing stories that keep us watching for more from you. Thanks

This story like all your others is why you are one of my favorite authors.

Your characters become more than what was written on the page. They become people I would want to know. Thank you.

Sandy_Paris you really are a fantastic writer this story I could not put down till I got too the end, please please writer more like this story words cannot express how I really about this story I have too read this story again soon thank you I hope you will keep writing stories like this very loving story. xxx

I loved the fact the story was based in Glasgow and have been to many of the venues (Oran Mor and the Botanic Gardens as examples). Very well written, and unlike some stories, has good grammar and spelling. It was a long lead in but the tension had me on edge just willing Helen and Rachel to hug and kiss and pleasure each other. Not perhaps as graphic as some stories but nevertheless enjoyable. Thank you Sandy and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Hope to see you in Byres Road one day (in my dreams dear). Hazel

Well done! I must say that this is one hell of a story! I'm looking forward to reading more of it too. Thank you!

Just lovely. I really enjoyed this one Sandy, thank you for sharing it with us!

I love settling in bed with a beautiful romantic lesbian love story. It makes me feel all warm and cosy inside. Living vicariously through your beautiful stories. Thank for keeping me going. Needless to say I Love Your stories. Always looking forward to more of your work. Thank you always for decent well written stories. Xx

I think you could improve how you use your punctuation in the dialogues. They are grammatically correct, but often I get the feeling that they are not conveying the emotions YOU imagine when you write those dialogues. Maybe use '.' instead of ',' in some places and vice versa. Maybe use '...' where there is a pause with incomplete meaning or queries. And maybe also write that the character X inquired, paused, demanded, agreed, etc instead of just writing the dialogues. The story would've been immensely more pleasant to read if the dialogues weren't so flat.

Lovely story beautifully written. Thank you.

A wonderfully written story

Wonderfully written and sensual and sexy with a perfect build up to them finding each other. Helen falling out with her mother and the obvious love for the girls brought tears to my eyes. I’m a 57 year old straight bloke but it’s stories like these that get me every time. Thank you.

But it has the detail that feels real, probably borne from the writers own experience. It reminds me of Shaima32, who writes excellent stories about realistic ordinary people on this site, including another Glaswegan police story. The procedural detail only emphasises why these two delay for so long. Ambition and their loyalty to the job makes them wary. I like that its a story without artificial tropes like breakups or deaths to push the plot along. Well done.

Many thanks to all of you have taken the time to read, comment and vote on this story.

The comments are welcome and constructive, any grammatical or spelling errors are mine (or Grammarly's). The procedural descriptions are based on first-hand knowledge and I am familiar with Glasgow as those of you who know the city would be able to confirm.

As with many of my stories I seem unable to let my characters disappear and I'm working on a story about the grown-up Megan. Helen and Rachel appear and this time there is no dry procedure.

Thanks again.

Another fantastically well written piece...can't wait for your next.

Sandy_paris this story you have written is fantastic you are a brilliant writer hope there is more stories like this to come I have read this story many times always something new I find thank you sandy_paris.xxxxxx

Feels like we experienced unhurried lesbian romance in the company of a mature grown-up. You didn't have to say that the 'procedural' parts are from first-hand experience: it was clear. And just a bit too much, in my opinion. Details are great, if it gives us insight into character or gets the protagonists into the place they need to be. Here I thought it got a bit too technical. But great writing, and superb, sensitive sex.

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I do love this story. I had to come back and read it again. Thank you for sharing it with us!

So enjoyable to read, I love the pacing.

Although I have read this story many times (and Megan and Mollys story) it is to my eternal shame that I have never commented to tell you how wonderful this tale is.

I know all of the places you mention. I went to secondary school just up from Byres Road, spent many a "day off" school in Hillhead Library!!

I`m a lifelong Thistle fan, again not a million miles away, and for a few years ran the karaoke at a very popular bar just around the corner from Byres Road, oh, and twice defended myself and won in the Glasgow Courts (speeding and going through a red light at 3am on a double decker bus, the other one was even more ludicrous), but I digress.

My sister in law did a very similar job to the one in your story for many years before retiring from the force.

A great, yet simple story of two people who meet through their overlapping jobs and find happiness together.

Another very easy 5 stars awarded :)

Lovely!