All Comments on 'Legally Nude Ch. 11'

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CBellsCBellsalmost 9 years ago
Excellent!

Great to see the frequent posting of new chapters! This one leaves you with a wide scope going forwards...looking forward to Ch 12

fanfarefanfarealmost 9 years ago
Who guards the guardians?

HS, a really thought provoking chapter. And, as usual very well written. Now to address several issues,

The first couple of chapters dealt with the issue of terrorism against the court system. That was the 'Cause Célèbre au Natural' of the lawyers being required to work in the nude. A follow-up of what happened with the courts and other attorney's could be very interesting and amusing.

Mala's got some explaining to do! Kinda cools off my good opinion of your characters of Mala and Claire and their lack of character.

Nude sailing?...around the World??...on a racing yacht???...fun to write, fun to read. Butt for gawdesses sake, don't try this one at home!

It is freaking cold and wet out there...on a good day. And when you are trying to beat through the passages of Cape Horn, fighting the Williwaw for every precious nautical mile...this is one of the most extreme of environments!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Terry's daughter

I never did hear it mentioned whether Terry's daughter worked nude also during her summer employment?

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