by Big_Vermont_Beauty
Better than average porn writing -- at least for those who like some semblance of a plot. I'm enjoying the sense of place and the characters as you/ve portrayed them.
I'm not into BBWs myself, but Etienne is entitled to his preferences. Looking forward to "02."
Well done on chapter one develop the characters a little more some of us want substance with the porn looking forward to chapter two
That's a great start.
I'm looking forward to more as the story develops.
Keep up the good work.