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All Comments on 'Lemonade and White Melons Ch. 04'

by Nigel Debonnaire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent story

Loved it. Sad yet happy ending. I love happy resolution at the end. Wish it was longer.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 11 years ago

This story deserves more readers.....

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Excelent series, very emotional!

MarraTedMarraTedover 7 years ago
This is short but excellent!

This could have been 20 or more parts, but, as concise as it is, it actually works beautifully.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good love story. You find potential patients with suspected stroke or cardiac signs, Mitch better to carry em... don’t walk.

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