All Comments on 'Lemongrass'

I really loved this, you captured the feeling of innocence perfectly, and I loved the format.

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The story was a good story and it had a good theme. Though there wasn't a lot of sex it still was good. Keep up the good work.

Loved it. More like this please!

A brilliant little story, WP, and congratulations. "Speedy Delivery" made me laugh: "Lemongrass" touched my heart. Julia and Lemon---two lovely characters who make you think that perhaps there is hope for the world. I think you've found a new niche and it looks as if it will be a constant five-star one.

I am a sucker for romance. Nice way to pass a little time in the afternoon, thank you.

you were right, this story is so much better than your Charlotte story, I am also wondering how you came up with the name lemongrass, I know you wrote that her parents were hippies, but still a very good story

jenorma2012, the name lemongrass was pulled out of the air. I must have had Thai food on the brain as I was writing.

I really liked the soft, romantic approach. It was erotic but not raunchy. There are plenty of raunchy stories and plenty of room for more like this.

This was amazing. Please tell me there will be a second part to it? Maybe when lemon comes to visit over winter break?

Great story, thank you so very much for sharing it with us!

Please write more for lemon and julia.

It was as ever well written and sexy

Lemon and Julia? Were they able to make their long distance relationship work? How did Lemon react to the photo contest reward Julia got? Did their careers turn out the way they both hoped? Once again, a really good story with interesting characters.

IMHO Lemon and Julia deserve many more chapters. I’ve always enjoyed reading your stories, but something about these young ladies always has me wanting more. By far this my favorite of everything you’ve published. And that’s saying a lot! Every couples months I need my Lemongrass fix and I come back for a reread. 5+ stars! Please consider continuing Lemon’s and Julia’s adventure.

I've just taken a few minutes to re-read Lemongrass. This lovely short story still makes me feel good, touches my heart and brings a little lump to my throat. Thanks, Wax.

........... I love and hate at the same time!!!!

OK "hate" is maybe a bit harsh. I`ve read all of Wax`s stories and this one is by far my favourite. I can also understand why she may be reluctant to continue this really sweet and easy flowing tale just in case she doesn`t recreate the same feelings in her readers.

As much as I can see and understand both sides of her dilemma in continuing, I`d still love to see this story go on at least a few more chapters.

This story is so sweet and loving. It’s just perfect.

Can’t be tired of saying you write very well. The description is great and the kindofbackandfourth is cute, with humor and care. Thanks

Nice Perfectly Cute Love Story!

I really enjoyed this story and plan to read more of your similar work. I just recently read "Softail", which I completely loved, and accepted your recommendation to read Lemongrass. I plan to read Speedy Delivery next, however would also like for you to consider writing a Pt. 02 for Lemongrass.

These type of "cute Lesbian Love Stories"🎉 are a joy to read!!!

Your my favorite writer. I prefer a storyline as opposed to just sex. You balance both well.

There's no chapter 2, but there is a story called Soft Tail, with different characters, but the same warm feeling.

Lots of charm and a story that whetted my interest in photography - so a story that made a guy wet, so to say...

STILL my favourite story after all this time ...........

I read soft tail first. THEN I read this one. Personally, I think this ended too quick. Since this is a memoir I would think it would continue. But, if she was writing up to the present day then, the author should have stepped in and finished the story. These are just my thoughts, and in no way should tell you how to write your stories.

Now, having my personal thoughts out of the way, I can say this is an excellent story. The sex scene could only happen at the end. There had to be a build up for the whole story to work. Although you could say they were already lovers when Julia started writing. You didn’t really get the feeling of what they felt for each other until later. I am glad Julia found Lemon. Someone who would not take advantage of her, and saw her for what she was. A kind and loving individual. Besides my personal thoughts, I have you 5 stars. If anything I connected with it.

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