All Comments on 'Lend Me...'

Not a lot to it, but a fun read anyway. 5 stars.

A nice well written story.

A part two might be created if it is as good as this piece.

5 stars

Please continue!

Thanks for sharing another great story with well developed characters. Not sure how you keep all the story lines and back stories straight. Keep it up. I will be re-reading this for sure!

I really like all of your stories. They are always nicely written, to the point and interesting. Keep it up

Although a lot of it IS "Wham, bam, thank you, ma'am," you make it entertaining while you bring the characters to life. I am curious, though, and I thought you might have mentioned it in the story - how did they both end up in the same place, so far from home?

KEEP IT UP.

Please turn it into a series! Seeing GOOD stuff here!

another great and sexy story. Lots more story potential here

Happy to hear there's more to come! Another great start for a another promising series.

Good writing.

So glad to here there is more to come :-)

You've done another great story, hope to see another chapter.

this such a hot tale we surely have to explore the relationship further.

Thanks for writing this one too

More on this pair please.

5* This was a funny and highly erotic story. Please finish it.

You've developed the characters. Got a working plot line. Now for the next installment. Please.

Some how Yvonnes mom needs to be involved. Maybe shes trying on some underwear for a new date but sees Richard in the store and Richard cant keep his eyes off the mature beauty.

Maybe he helps her with her fitting while yvonne is out of the store. He grabs a DD bra but its not big enough for her mom.

Damn my imaginations going crazy. You got this!! Cant wait to see more from this story haha good luck man

Would love if Yvonnes mom came into the store. Maybe it ultimately leads to a 3some. I just re-read this one.... One if my favs. Great sex between the two.

But it seems like you've stopped writing...please continue. I'm a big fan, it that counts...

Kids sure can change between early teens through adulthood, especially females. LOL

Awesome and kinda abrupt. Think more is needed about their relationship, the shop will need some inappropriate attention I am sure!

I see that it has been ~5 years since you wrote this story, but it would be nice if there was a next chapter or two. I love your writing style and have read many of the stories.

Far too long for what it was.

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Fun und Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

This story was a horny delight! 5*

Load of crap.