by MidnightConfession
What a great and well-written story! I'm not from the US but your writing brought me to these farms, roads, and cornfields. It was definitely a fun read and I pictured Mrs. Hollinger as Milena Velba in my mind :D
Mmmm. As a farm boy you lost me with the comment, "pulling a red wagon with hay, a bundle of clothing and tools". And how does a yard become an overgrown corn field?
You obviously know nothing about farming.
I loved it why didnt happen to me my niebour looked like that with massive tits
Very well written. I grew up in places like that and you brought it all back. Mutual respect and intimacy topped with a promise. Thank you very much.
I want more of this. It happens to me when I was in my late teens and it was a wonderful diner fall and winter
Great story.
Far to much fluff written into it to increase the word count.
A few grammar mishaps, but it is a wank story and most readers don't care.
The author would be well advised to find an editor and or a proofreader.
This was the sort of story I've been looking for. It was great! Please write more. I'd love to know how things develop between Luke and Mrs Hollinger.
Nearly flawless to me... build up was great, the lusty but sweet older "matron" absolutely perfect in her depiction and actions... a young man wanting, but unsure of himself and the older woman's encouragement of his excitement over her makes me hopeful there will be a next part!
Wonderful story helping Luke know how to treat a lady and get the most from their relationship
Wonderful! I really connected with both of the characters, and the story. Turn on definitely.