All Comments on 'Lending a Hand'

by MidnightConfession

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MarassoMarasso7 months ago

What a great and well-written story! I'm not from the US but your writing brought me to these farms, roads, and cornfields. It was definitely a fun read and I pictured Mrs. Hollinger as Milena Velba in my mind :D

lc69hunterlc69hunter7 months ago

very good story

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Awesome! Hope there’s a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Mmmm. As a farm boy you lost me with the comment, "pulling a red wagon with hay, a bundle of clothing and tools". And how does a yard become an overgrown corn field?

You obviously know nothing about farming.

stewartbstewartb7 months ago

With a little help from a friend life on the farm goes on and on.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I loved it why didnt happen to me my niebour looked like that with massive tits

deependerdeepender7 months ago

Very well written. I grew up in places like that and you brought it all back. Mutual respect and intimacy topped with a promise. Thank you very much.

deependerdeepender7 months ago

You could write a whole series based upon this as a foundation.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

need more , for him to enter her

spurtman1spurtman17 months ago

Great story! I love it when older, mature ladies seduce young bucks!

cucked05cucked057 months ago

Part 2 please.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I want more of this. It happens to me when I was in my late teens and it was a wonderful diner fall and winter

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Effing lusty and hot

CharletteCharlette7 months ago

Great story.

Far to much fluff written into it to increase the word count.

A few grammar mishaps, but it is a wank story and most readers don't care.

The author would be well advised to find an editor and or a proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story, huge tits older lady. Let's go with 2 or similar.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was the sort of story I've been looking for. It was great! Please write more. I'd love to know how things develop between Luke and Mrs Hollinger.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Nearly flawless to me... build up was great, the lusty but sweet older "matron" absolutely perfect in her depiction and actions... a young man wanting, but unsure of himself and the older woman's encouragement of his excitement over her makes me hopeful there will be a next part!

oxygen5011oxygen50116 months ago

Fabolous story!

DivaDyfiDivaDyfi6 months ago

Brilliant! I hope to read more as their relationship develops.

kriss4912kriss49125 months ago

Wonderful story helping Luke know how to treat a lady and get the most from their relationship

CurteyCurtey5 months ago

Wonderful! I really connected with both of the characters, and the story. Turn on definitely.

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