All Comments on 'Leo and the Dragon Ch. 04'

would love to read more on these wonderful adventures. very much enjoyed the story from beginning to the hopefully not the end

Another amazing entry to the series. Would like to see more of these adventures.

"Leo and the Dragon" is a complete story, not a series. I split it into four parts mainly because it was a huge story at around 35.000 words. Even split into parts it was quite the undertaking to keep it as error-free as possible.

There is a sequel to it in the works, tentatively titled "Shilana's Trial". Since I'm a little busy right now I'm somewhat hard-pressed for quality writing time, but I hope to get it out eventually.

I liked it a lot, and i do hope you continue with a sequel.

I also hope you continue your other story, which was also fantastic.

I haven't forgotten about Cat, honest. I don't know how other writers do it, but writing for me is a very mood-sensitive process. I just can't sit down and churm out the next chapter of a story, I need to be in "a cyberpunk mood", if that makes any sense, and it's hard to go all end-of-the-world when we have weather like this :)

I hope not. Great chapters so for. Keep up the great work!

Awesome series - great characters and narrative as well as sexy; well worth the 5 stars

Thank you.

1st -- "The End?"

Oh, I very much hope not...

2nd -- Anyone else noticing that everything is italicized for some weird reason on this page? I think the HTML formatting might not have the closing </i> tag.

cittran, I've seen the same thing, with the italics in the last few paragraphs. Easy explanation: I messed up. But I have already sent in an edited version that should take care of this slip-up.

Love the series, would like to see it continue. Maybe using Shilana gilt against her to accept the Drow women.

"Shilana's Trial" is underwy, and it will give the readers a deeper understanding at why the elf mage is so reluctant to accept the dark elves. Shilana will learn to accept them eventually, rest assured. But no promises for a hot elven threesome :-)

Excellent flow.

Your characters developed pleasantly, without falling into one-dimensional woodeness.

I also enjoyed your focus on the sensual - too many writers think a litany of penis-vagina statements are all it takes to make a good story. The passion you managed to make apparent in the dark elves without making them seem sluts was very nifty.

I still prefer your work with Cat - write more tho, write whatever pleases you. I will happily read.

Please tell me there's more coming. I would looove to see what happens with this group next! ^_^

Ya gotta keep this one going!

Please!

You have got a great story here, plz consider keeping it going... It would be great to see the adventures of the 5 and how things come together for Leo and Shilana, then add in the dark drow and Shilana as a 3 some to break the bad memories of her past. Throw in the Dwarf and you have one heck of a series here... thanks for a great read

Good story, good sex but I have one question... why a war hammer? Even Conan the Barbarian used a two handed sword. Seems like the hammer would be a pain in the ass to lug around unlike having a sword secured to your back.

Well done! It would be great to have more stories of this party! Thanks!