All Comments on 'Leon Lust aka the Dancer'

This was definitely a good story, but it felt a little rushed to me. I am looking forward to reading a second chapter of this story. Keep writing for you bring the character to a pop.

Unfortunately I was a bit rushed

But part two (should there be one) will definitely be much more well written in terms of detail! I promise:)

I loved it, I want to read the future as well!