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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A constructive criticism - I hope!

It would appear that English is not your first language.

It will improve your stories if you first type them out as Word documents, run them though the Spellchecker and then copy and paste them into Literotica.

This is the only downside to an otherwise very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lovely

Excellent story

editing was a bit messy but it did not spoil my enjoyment of the story

lucky girls indeed.

Sarah_EagerSarah_Eagerover 12 years ago

Bad editing or some copy / pasting from another story but Sandy / Joanne / Hikari seem to become interchangeable which made getting to grips with the characters a little confusing. Nice story though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

who's Sandy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Laughably bad

If English is your first language you should just give up. If not find someone to proofread for you. There's hardly a single sentence in this story that doesn't have at least one mistake. I'm not a stickler for perfection but this many mistakes makes the story too hard to read for it to be interesting.

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