All Comments on 'Lesbian Cuckoldress Ch. 01'

Cheating? Seduction? Nope, just good old fashioned rape!

Just panach. A panache is an air.

Seductress. Seductor is masculine.

Tell more, explain less; we get it

You'll beg me for a fuck, my lil' lezzie whore. Note the comma.

No need to disparage the absent husband. Develop her character instead. Her sudden surrender and growing need to serve are interesting enough. And it's fine for her to get to be a "l'll lezzie." if she wants. Guilt or shame not required for a good story.

I liked it.

Was a Little bit rushed, in my opinion. I would have liked a longer seduction but the predator (Miranda) seemed to just go straight in and before the next paragraph had her breasts in her mouth and legs spread being licked out. Whilst I thoroughly enjoyed the picture of the mature woman cuckolding the younger woman and want to read more about them, a bit more description and build up would have been welcomed

Wouldn't really call it a story as it really doesn't have any depth. I would call it an outline of a story. It needs a lot of gaps filled in. Way more detail and description as long as some character development would be needed to make it a story

Concept was good but story was poor. Rather had more descriptive ideas in the whole seduction part to try n seduce your straight married wife then a little winery n then basically right to the sex. For your first it was good thou

My Darling, my name is Cookie and my husband Howard is deployed overseas in the Navy. I just read your "Lesbian Cuckoldress Ch. 01. I'm shaking as a result. The only thing I would change would be the speed at which the seduction takes place. When I was eleven I was seduced by my neighbor. It took weeks not minutes to accomplish. However, it was a great way for me to spend my evening. Keep writing, I'm waiting to read Ch. 02. Love....Cookie.

When I was 31, a new neighbor seduced me over a three=day holiday weekend while my husband was away. It was my first bi experience and I loved it. She lovingly dominated me and satisfied my unfulfilled need for passionate intimacy. It lasted for two years. Thanks for rekindling the fire of great memories.

too short

Very seductive story. Miranda is quite a woman.

So hot! I am soaked and heading for bit of self love ....

too rushed and unrealistic, not enough build up and devoid of any feeling whatsoever