by silkstockingslover
This story needs to continue damn it was hot. One of your best Top 3 for sure
Oh WOW! That was the best story I ever read. Maureen was a true submissive and Heather was a true Mistress.
ff what a story I was about to cum all the time; I think I'm going to finger my ass
I almost didn't give it 5*, due to the way the kid talked to her MILF. But, then I remembered the submissive part, and relented. 5* it is.
325. Iwas confused with some of the names of Heather’s subs and really didn’t think they were needed for the story, but the overall buildup was interesting and sexy. The end was a bit abrupt, but not so much if there were to be sequals, but unfortunately, there appears to be none. Nice read anyway.
7 chapter build up 5 paragraph ending why so rushed great story needs another chapter or to when the daughter returns home maybe
I love this story. It makes me so horny. It makes me wish I was a lesbian in stead of just a horny submissive guy.
Will there be more? Great story, as usual ;-)
Please write more of Heather's using stockings to make older women want to submit. I found the online chatting also enticing - and would like to see more use of online conversations as part of story development.
Just don't know how you do it, the character build-up is excellent as is the gradual submission. The young-old power exchange is so exciting. Will there be more of Heather and Maureen?
This is definitely one of your best stories, very, very sexy indeed. Thank you!!!
Your story has taken me back to the days of being dominated by the high school teacher while I was in the 12th grade (yes i was 18). To this day i dream of her as she opens her legs wide (no panties) and shows all to the few select girls on the cheer squad. Have been with dozens of women since then but always remember the first. Thanks for memory lane.
Your early stories, and there are scores of them, were verbose self-referencing sprawls that blatantly copied others' ideas.
I'm very glad to see you've learned how to write a great story, even a lengthy one.
How was that? "Good things come to those who wait" (and look elsewhere in the meantime).
Another in a long line of great erotic stories... this one leaves me gasping... wanting more... much more... I submit to you Jasmine Walker
I love this!!! Through out this story my pussy was constantly leaking with excitement. I hope there is more to these characters and this not be the end of a wonderful story. Well done.
Very hot tale. Been reading few more pf silkstockingslover's stories. All hot stuff.
What a delightful tale and one, I hope, has our lawyer undertaking many more adventures. My kitty was very wet reading this.
Legs still spread over the arms of the chair, leather wet from the orgasms you inspired. Calming down now, but you had me going in several directions. My poor rabbit needs some rest. Beautiful story that ties in to my submissive nature. So rewarding to serve others. My favorite sexual exerience was being used by a small group of close friends during sleepovers as our parents slept. Please please please consider a group experience. You are a talented writer, consider more lesbian stories. Nothing gets me going more than slow seduction and a beautifully detailed kiss no matter where my mouth is. Thank you
I absolutely loved this story! Although I would love to see more of this story unfold, maybe this is the end?!? I hope not. I would definitely love to read more about what Heather has in store for Maureen.
That was 8 pages that went by way too fast.
My puss is soaked. I need to find my own teem mistress.
i agree with the comment below , heather should get the 2 milfs to seduce their daughters as well , and i hope we see the teacher seduce Cammie as instructed
Enjoyed this story a lot and the way the MILF submitted so willingly. However, this story could go on for many more chapters. Like having the MILF seduce her own daughter, have either the teacher or mother of her friend seduce the MILF, so many option available.
Good job as usual.
But with this one, I got tired of reading the text abbreviations as they chatted. Actual dialog is so much better than text shorthand.
You have a beautiful mind and a wonderful way of writing what's in it. I love your stories. They always get me wet and excited, thank you.
I like this story a lot..Your writing is great..Wish maybe you would use some nipple torture and spanking in some of ur stories..Hope there is more in this series..
Another great story Jasmin, wonderful and I hope we get more installments soon
I call it perfecting your craft. Keep doing what you do. Please and thank you.
Write something without the same over re-used ideas.... Geeze
Now I''m going to smoke a cigarette to trick my body that I just had sex after reading this story.
And I don't smoke.
You did it again, you lovely writer. I enjoyed it very much. You made me soo wet.
I love all your stories but this by far is your greatest work yet.
Without doubt, this is one of the hottest stories in its genre that I have seen here -- thank you, SSL -- I enjoyed every word. Five stars seems a paltry reward for such delicious excess!
Another great story x hope to see a sequel to the one written for me
Dione xx
You drive a point too hard, Take this fragment of one of your sentences, "The young eighteen year old senior ... ," and this after telling the reader twice that the on-line female was young. Did you think a reader might misplace that character fact in the 20 seconds it took to read this far?
I couldn't stop till I got to page eight. Can't wait for a sequel. Hopefully Cammie will go under her teacher's desk.